Almost perfect, and I’m going to be rude and offer unsolicited, hopefully constructive, criticism: when the second boob appears it’s not immediately clear which one is which because the first one keeps switching between left and right between panels. Otherwise excellent.
Booby Dance
Submitted 1 day ago by fossilesque@mander.xyz to science_memes@mander.xyz
https://mander.xyz/pictrs/image/d283f748-14d5-4826-b5e3-29bac66ac127.jpeg
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Lumidaub@feddit.org 1 day ago
nocturne@slrpnk.net 1 day ago
The boob in the 4th and right side of the 5th panels are identical, as are the 2nd and right side of the 6th.
Lumidaub@feddit.org 1 day ago
Yeah, I did figure it out after taking another look. It’s not ideal though for your comic to make readers have to figure out who’s who and where in a panel (unless there’s some effect you want to achieve, like disorientation - rules are meant to be broken after all). Compare the 180 degrees rule in movie making (which is also true in comics).
chellomere@lemmy.world 1 day ago
All boobs are unique and beautiful in themselves
the_tab_key@lemmy.world 1 day ago
No butt stuff…I don’t have a butt.
woodenghost@hexbear.net 1 day ago
They have a cloaca. It’s all butt stuff.
Maeve@kbin.earth 1 day ago
Vonnegut's ghost laughs.
rljkeimig@lemmy.world 1 day ago
Unfortunately due to the cloaca situation, butt stuff is inevitable.
Grass@sh.itjust.works 1 day ago
wait, it’s all butt stuff? 🌏👨🚀🔫👨🚀