Logline
Shore leave on a pleasure planet turns dangerous when the crew’s promised escape stops behaving like fun.
Written by: Kathryn Lyn
Directed by: Yana Gorskaya
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Shore leave on a pleasure planet turns dangerous when the crew’s promised escape stops behaving like fun.
Written by: Kathryn Lyn
Directed by: Yana Gorskaya
Mixed bag of an episode.
I liked that we got some proper character development - Spock and Kirk coming closer together, an origin point for their friendship is good to see, and the hallucination was a useful way to explain why spock would be willing to open up to such a friendship in the first place. Ortegas and Scotty similarly got some satisfying growth, and the quite unprofessional arguing between them didn’t end drag on for too long.
I did not like the first couple of acts. I know this is meant to be a comedy episode, but none of the jokes really landed for me, it was just kind of a slog to get through. I’m not a big fan of “stoner / drunk” humour in other shows, and it’s not a whole lot better here. I am not sure if the alien host was meant to be funny or charming, but they just came across as mildly annoying. If I compare this to pleasure-planet episodes we’ve seen in other trek shows, I don’t feel the pleasure planet really added a whole lot. CG sequences aside, they were in a fancy hotel more than an actual planet.
Something that really bugged me is that despite repeated references to alternate shifts, at no point did any of the “alphas” think that maybe it might be worth handing off the negotiations or asking for help with the bomb. It speaks to a kind of arrogance that doesn’t really play well given the whole point of the episode is learning to rely on others.
The final act is again mixed. The idea of a pressure bomb, the sci fi equivalent of a landmine, is a great way of building tension, brings ortegas and scotty together fully. But that it then also provides the solution for the diplomatic problems make no sense. The aliens say that particular type of bomb is part of a peace ritual that hasn’t been seen in generations, but then why would a separatist use that for their sabotage?
Overall it was alright, but not amazing.
ValueSubtracted@startrek.website 8 hours ago You have not experienced Bonnie Tyler until you have heard her in the original Klingon.
I’m not sure there’s a lot to say about this one. I enjoyed it. The jokes didn’t land quite as well as they should have, but I have to take some responsibility for watching a stoner comedy at 9 am.
The Spirk enthusiasts should be pretty happy, though.
khaosworks@startrek.website 14 hours ago Annotations for 4x03 up at: startrek.website/post/43096604
Stormygeddon@startrek.website 2 hours ago
It tries to be fun, but some of the jokes didn’t land. That said, I’m not going to fault them for trying “The Hangover” in Space as it feels like at least it’s something different and not so much by committee, and I still enjoyed most of the episodes. This is probably the best of the very rare “Ortegas Episodes” and I particularly liked seeing an “It’s green” scene yet again.