All boobs are unique and beautiful in themselves
Comment on Booby Dance
Lumidaub@feddit.org 1 day ago
Almost perfect, and I’m going to be rude and offer unsolicited, hopefully constructive, criticism: when the second boob appears it’s not immediately clear which one is which because the first one keeps switching between left and right between panels. Otherwise excellent.
chellomere@lemmy.world 1 day ago
Grail@multiverse.soulism.net 1 day ago
It’s was immediately obvious to Me
Lumidaub@feddit.org 1 day ago
Good job.
Grail@multiverse.soulism.net 1 day ago
Thanks, friend!
nocturne@slrpnk.net 1 day ago
The boob in the 4th and right side of the 5th panels are identical, as are the 2nd and right side of the 6th.
Lumidaub@feddit.org 1 day ago
Yeah, I did figure it out after taking another look. It’s not ideal though for your comic to make readers have to figure out who’s who and where in a panel (unless there’s some effect you want to achieve, like disorientation - rules are meant to be broken after all). Compare the 180 degrees rule in movie making (which is also true in comics).