Comment on Writing something, how would you describe his sleeping “expression”?

• Asafum@lemmy.world ⁨8⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

  Yeah that sounds pretty light lol

  I’m definitely not a writer, but “Fallen into a deep sleep, his face expressionless, a light snore escaped (escapes?) him” sounds nice to me.

  I envy your confidence in writing! Every time I tried I get like 2 sentences down and immediately think “who the fuck am I to be writing something thinking anyone should even care to read this?” Lol

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  • may_be@thelemmy.club ⁨7⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

    Same honestly but I love thinking about writing!!! Thanks!!

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  • may_be@thelemmy.club ⁨7⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

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    What’s Larry’s expression?

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    • WhiteOakBayou@lemmy.world ⁨7⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

      I can’t decide if he is sighing or sobbing

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    • may_be@thelemmy.club ⁨7⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

      Maybe he’d be “weary”

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      • Asafum@lemmy.world ⁨7⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

        Or disinterested, bored, depending on the greater context even possibly dejected.

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