There’s already an “I” earlier in that sentence, so it’s not necessary necessary, especially in poetry, but it would absolutely be clearer with another.
Comment on xkcd #3076: The Roads Both Taken
YungOnions@lemmy.world 1 week ago
Is that not missing an ‘I’? As in
I travelled both though I be one traveller…
idiomaddict@lemmy.world 1 week ago
Tar_alcaran@sh.itjust.works 1 week ago
It’s an adaptation from “the road not taken”, by Robert Frost, which does the same