Caught up since I put it on hold a while ago, but I’m afraid it’s still not doing it for me. It’s too messy in what it’s trying to convey.

The first arc was a pretty simple and focused premise and tbh mostly vibes, where 4 pages per chapter were more than fine. In this arc it’s trying to juggle multiple things and actually exploring some more complicated things, all in 4 pages per week.

If the chapters were longer, like this one, I feel like it’d be able to develop better.