I considered recommending “attempt at” but “an attempt at a model” still sounds weird. OP went with “to create” which sounds better 🙂
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sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.works 3 weeks agoIt would sound better as one of the following:
- An attempt at a comprehensive…
- An attempt to create a comprehensive…
wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world 3 weeks ago
wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world 3 weeks ago
I considered recommending “attempt at” but “an attempt at a model” still sounds weird. OP went with “to create” which sounds better 🙂