Comment on Email Security for Every Taste

• sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.works ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  It would sound better as one of the following:

  • An attempt at a comprehensive…
  • An attempt to create a comprehensive…

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  • wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    I considered recommending “attempt at” but “an attempt at a model” still sounds weird. OP went with “to create” which sounds better 🙂

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  • wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    I considered recommending “attempt at” but “an attempt at a model” still sounds weird. OP went with “to create” which sounds better 🙂

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• wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  It does. How about

  An attempt to summarize a comprehensive threat model for emails

  Or, in place of summarize - define, or outline?

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  • loudwhisper@infosec.pub ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    Thanks, I have taken @sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.works’s suggestion and I have added “create”.

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    • wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

      Aw how come you always take his ideas instead of mine it’s not fair

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      • loudwhisper@infosec.pub ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

        Sorry about that :) But you get the credit for spotting the problem! Thanks for that!

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