Comment on Email Security for Every Taste

wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

• loudwhisper@infosec.pub ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  I don’t think so, does it sound weird? Not a native speaker, so maybe it does :)

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  • sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.works ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    It would sound better as one of the following:

    • An attempt at a comprehensive…
    • An attempt to create a comprehensive…

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    • wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

      I considered recommending “attempt at” but “an attempt at a model” still sounds weird. OP went with “to create” which sounds better 🙂

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    • wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

      I considered recommending “attempt at” but “an attempt at a model” still sounds weird. OP went with “to create” which sounds better 🙂

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  • wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    It does. How about

    An attempt to summarize a comprehensive threat model for emails

    Or, in place of summarize - define, or outline?

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    • loudwhisper@infosec.pub ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

      Thanks, I have taken @sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.works’s suggestion and I have added “create”.

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      • wazoobonkerbrain@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

        Aw how come you always take his ideas instead of mine it’s not fair

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