Comment on Breath Taker - A revised version of the Fedipunk story I posted here earlier (based on Feedback now with Fungi-Taylor-Swift, a Moderator character, Fridays for Fungi and MUCH MORE Lemmy-Drama)

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sbv@sh.itjust.works ⁨1⁩ ⁨year⁩ ago

I wrote it myself :D But its fine. I hoped it would be fun to read.

Getting someone else to edit it would help. There’s a lot going on in every sentence.

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