Comment on I have An Idea for A Better Space, SciFi, Exploration Entertainment, Than Even ‘Star Trek’.
Angelevo@feddit.nl 6 days ago
Better is subjective. What you describe could well be one of the factions in the Star Trek universe. You are telling a story from a slightly different perspective – an even more nonviolent one.
A good question to answer may be: What will make your story engaging to us all, in an age where so many stories have been told in so many ways?
GreatWhite_Shark_EarthAndBeingsRightsPerson@piefed.social 5 days ago
WOW!!!!! Thank You, for such positive response & encouragement.
What do mean by better is subjective?
‘Star Trek’ universe is just violent & wars, for what I described to fit into it.
Completely nonviolent, when you think of the fact that main Beings are non-violent, negotiators, & their ships would only have defensive weapons that can never directly harm attackers.
You really think the idea I summarized has been done before? I have never been a huge reader & read even less than I did as an HS student, but I never read-watch any entertainment comes close to what I have summarized. I no offense/harmful weapons anywhere, even on their hips, unlike both legendary Space SciFi entertainments.
Consider this scary thought, while I always think better of the middle-poor classes of people than most, has our world & our world’s entertainment become so violent-wars that there would not be a big enough audience for it?
Angelevo@feddit.nl 5 days ago
Perhaps I have imagined it too, then, for it feels very familiar. Do go on, I am willing to be your editor, when time etc. permits. Engage! ;)
GreatWhite_Shark_EarthAndBeingsRightsPerson@piefed.social 5 days ago
With all due respect, How good with English language are you? Not your fault, I have proven Learning Challenges that make English language & writing hard & truthfully a nerves about writing stories. Like I have said I am already in the most important story, I could ever write, for everything on this planet. I am also goingbto make all my stories interconnected, like TV spinoffs & movies beyond trilogies/3 & 6 (i do not what the correct terms are for them).
Angelevo@feddit.nl 4 days ago
You comment writing is a bit rambling, probably a fast and motivated brain – good! Make sure you keep an eye on tone and pace.