How does this pass for a uni level essay? Not to belabour the point but this is a final grade assignment for a social and developmental psychology course and the best she could do is quote the bible (honestly could have given her some points for the “ezer kenegdo” insight and received less heat) but stating personal opinions as fact was a big wtf - I mean this reads like a primary school level submission. Like imagine in any other scientific context calling anything demonic from a personal and not an analytical lens -

like imagine this was like an astronomy class and the student said “believing the earth rotates around the sun is demonic as Chronicles 16:30 clearly states the world cannot be moved”