Comment on Made my first short film 'What do You Want Now of This Metaphysical Love?'

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JoMiran@lemmy.ml ⁨6⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

I mean that the typeface you used is commonly used in memes. It just seems like it would have looked nicer with the title in a single title card screen rather than have pieces of it flashing and jumping around in the first few clips. It seems hyper, erratic, funny (again, in a meme way), and at odds with the vibe of the rest of the film.

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