Comment on DON'T CREATE AN IDOL FOR YOURSELF
magnusrufus@lemmy.world 6 months ago
I think your post would greatly benefit from an introductory paragraph preparing readers for what to expect. As it is the title and current first paragraph don’t convey the gist of what your post is about or why anyone should care about or read it and given it’s length most people are not going to give it the time to try and put that info together on their own.
Comrade_Colonel@lemmy.ml 6 months ago
Thanks! I will try to do so in the following articles.