I cleaned it up a bit, feedback assimilated
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Cralder@feddit.nu 6 months ago
This is really hard to read because the writer just sprinklers in random swear words into every sentence. I get that that is the point, hence the name of the site, but still. I’m not saying swears are bad or something but this is just really overdone. Just tone it down a bit. A swear is fine every few sentences but this is like one or two “fucking” per sentence, even where it doesn’t fit.
JaneTheMotherfucker@lemmy.world 6 months ago
rambaroo@lemmy.world 6 months ago
Yes, it’s extremely juvenile and annoying to read
JaneTheMotherfucker@lemmy.world 6 months ago
Fixed, thanks for your feedback.
solrize@lemmy.world 6 months ago
Still interesting, needs more fixing.