Comment on [DISC] Reincarnated as the Mastermind Behind the Story - Chapter 30

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astro_ray@piefed.social ⁨5⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

My problem is not with the pacing. Almost half of the chapter was just visuals of their journey to the fort, without a single speech bubble. They definitely could have handled it better.

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