Comment on [DISC] Reincarnated as the Mastermind Behind the Story - Chapter 30

astro_ray@piefed.social ⁨5⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

• PrincessKadath@ani.social ⁨5⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

  I can see your point, but I think it fits in the pacing of explaining things around. I am pretty sure that if you had chapters back to back you wouldn’t think this way. 😊

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  • astro_ray@piefed.social ⁨5⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

    My problem is not with the pacing. Almost half of the chapter was just visuals of their journey to the fort, without a single speech bubble. They definitely could have handled it better.

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    • PrincessKadath@ani.social ⁨5⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

      Oh, I see what you mean. I personally still prefer this over Game of Thrones teleportation, but I guess that’s just me.

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