Watched it all the way trough and these are my honest critics:

1. ai voice + music makes it feel like someone is talking a bedtime story to me
2. first two sfx were a bit loud on my headphones so try and normalize the sound
3. ai voice made all jokes feel dull. You can make that work as a character. For example Fireship makes good videos without raising his voice.
4. Lastly you could skin the video and put all important stuff into a short under 1 min and if views are what you want that is your best bet imo.